Hometown Girl
Where 30 meets 41
Where Route 30 meets 41,
a few miles down
the road,
collide into
where I am from-
a bedroom town
too confined to hold
an old soul with new age skin
like mine.
Slip back in time,
I longed to burst the seal
and be revealed
somewhere else, someone else.
But in this time
I am content to be the
broken mold, only-I-truly-know
self
that I have always been.
And
maybe when
now
fades to then
I’ll finally
run far into the night,
down the middle of
a two lane
highway that leads
right out of this
claustrophobic place,
and make a memory of
where 30 meets 41.
Where Route 30 meets 41,
a few miles down
the road,
collide into
where I am from-
a bedroom town
too confined to hold
an old soul with new age skin
like mine.
Slip back in time,
I longed to burst the seal
and be revealed
somewhere else, someone else.
But in this time
I am content to be the
broken mold, only-I-truly-know
self
that I have always been.
And
maybe when
now
fades to then
I’ll finally
run far into the night,
down the middle of
a two lane
highway that leads
right out of this
claustrophobic place,
and make a memory of
where 30 meets 41.
8 Comments:
At 8/07/2006 06:58:00 PM, Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.uk said…
This is a very good poem, Sara. The kind that I see would be easily published in a British poetry magazine.
love always
At 8/08/2006 10:08:00 AM, RomanceWriter said…
Your comments always make me smile. Thanks so much!
hugs,
Sara
At 8/08/2006 11:00:00 PM, Suzan Abrams, email: suzanabrams@live.co.uk said…
I love this, Sara. Truly! I love it so much. I think this is the poem I'll choose to memorise and hold as a memory of you for later years.
When I think back to something you said or wrote to me, years from now, I'll recite this poem and remember you.
You and Kelley are so special to me.
At 8/10/2006 10:34:00 AM, RomanceWriter said…
It's awesome that this one will remind you of me. It is all about who I am. Thanks for all your support. It makes a real difference!
Your friend,
Sara
At 2/04/2007 10:20:00 PM, Anonymous said…
Enjoyed a lot! » »
At 3/19/2007 08:34:00 PM, Sheila said…
Thank you for sharing your work. I enjoyed it.
At 3/19/2007 10:50:00 PM, LJP said…
I loved this poem. Especially the "old soul" part.
At 3/21/2007 08:29:00 AM, FRIDAY'S CHILD said…
A beautiful poem. Well done.
I'm here from the Gonzo Carnival.
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